Steady Downpour

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The path turned wet
The drizzle turned to a steady downpour
The angst hiccupped and then exploded
A million portions of a lonely heart crashed
The small rivulets joined in
Tender but all absorbing
Walking back on the path
Life on a rewind
Whirlwind towards the womb
The same darkness
This time no light in sight
Some flower laden branches collapsed
The red flowers turned out to be fragile
The nest seemed abandoned
Walking on, getting wet
Tears mingling with the raindrops
Melting the steely spine
Standing up on the slippery path
No sturdy, shady tree around
Only vast wet winding path……………..



Comments

  1. SeemaDecember 18, 2014 at 4:27 AM

    Hey soulsearchingdays,

    We’re soon nearing the end of this year and stepping onto 2015. A lot happened across the blogosphere this year; I was amused to catch up on so many new events when I opened my Reader after a long hibernation. The beginning of this year and the last saw a bunch of us bloggers participating in a month long marathon. It was fun, crazy, exciting, hectic and absolutely insane. I thought we must continue with the tradition in the upcoming year as well. Would you like to join the madness this time too? Please drop me an email if you are interested at kamathseema1@gmail.com

    Thanks,
    Seema

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  2. lanDecember 18, 2014 at 10:59 PM

    checking5

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  3. lanDecember 18, 2014 at 11:00 PM

    hi ss i think this last comment will appear. i am using firefox instead of chrome. do reply if u see this

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  4. soulsearchingdaysDecember 19, 2014 at 12:50 AM

    yeah lan finally your comments are appearing... :)

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  5. anusiaDecember 24, 2014 at 3:37 AM

    Very nice lines. Each line is beautiful. Liked the style of the writer.

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