can i ask you to not go that way?

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This ocean that I see inside you
once it submerged my heart too
That sand under your feet 
which feels warm and looks neat
in a split second  that can give away
Can I ask you  to not  go that way?

castles that you build on the seashore
they are doomed to drown for sure
cool breeze of dawn and golden light
masks the crawlers of midnight
their painful sting can take your life away
Can I ask you to not go that way?

The tall coconut trees ashore gives no shade
even this fuzzy feeling shall fade
moonlight might still wane
bringing along heartbreak insane
only shadows of memories will stay
Can I ask you to not go that way?

long walks , music and chitchats
all those letters and knickknacks
which now  light up your eyes 
might all then look like lies
then be strong and just pray?
Can I ask you to not go that way?






























Comments

  1. lanDecember 22, 2022 at 10:58 PM

    hope all is well dear ss. just a bit concerned at the tinge of despair in most posts. wish is that that it is the writer in you exploring all feelings which if try is just great. wishing you a wonderful time at the holidays and looking forward to a great year for all of us. love, lan.

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  2. soulsearchingdaysJanuary 4, 2023 at 10:23 PM

    Thanks dear lan , all is well :)

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